You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Is this a positive or a negative development?
Give reasons and examples from your knowledge or experience to support your ideas.
Write at least 250 words.
In the past, most of us used to shop at small, specialised shops; however, nowadays, most prefer visiting malls where everything is available under one roof, and as a result, shops are closing. Looking at this change, one must analyse whether this is a good trend or a bad one. In my view, malls have brighter future considering their merits.
There are multiple reasons for visiting large shopping complexes. Firstly, they have all kinds of products and services under one roof as all shops are in one building. As a result, one saves time and efforts in buying for a variety of products. For instance, recently when I shopped for my office clothes, I realised I needed a few additional light bulbs for Diwali preparation. Since I could find the suitable bulbs on in the same building, I saved another errand in the day. Secondly, one can freely check products as pleased or ask for a trial for goods in a large shopping centre. So, buyers become more confident about what to buy.
On the other hand, few believe that small businesses are losing their income source because they are losing their traditional customers to malls. Consequently, unemployment in communities is increasing. However, all small shop owners can collaborate and share their resources to build their shopping complexes. Thus, they will be able to attract more customers to their businesses. For example, in my hometown with the help of local municipality small shops have shifted in an organised market which offers a similar experience as that offered by the malls.
In the end, people prefer organised shopping conglomerates which save their resources and offer liberty while purchasing. Although local shops are getting closed due to this trend, they can collaborate to address their economic issues. So, I believe travelling to shopping malls is a positive development.
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