IELTS letter to a friend who proposed you to be a business partner

IELTS letter to a friend who proposed you to be a business partner

One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business.

Write a letter to reply to your friend’s offer.  In your letter

  • Give your opinion about friend’s business ideas
  • Tell him whether you have decided to accept his offer
  • And explain your reasons for the decision

Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear _________,

IELTS letter to a friend who proposed you to be a business partner

Introduction

Dear Harshad,

It was nice catching up with you at Shrikant’s housewarming party the other night. Also, it was very generous of you to discuss your future entrepreneurial venture and to invite me to join in.

Body Paragraph 1 on your opinion of the business

After understanding your business model, I researched, and I happen to agree with the majority of the ideas. Specifically, I approve that the void of IT applications in Human Resources is a huge opportunity in future.

Body Paragraph 2 on your decision to join the business

Honestly, I was pleasantly surprised when you offered me to come on board as a partner and more than happy to accept it.

Body Paragraph 3 on reasons for your decision

Our friendship goes long back in time, and I am sure that we can hit the market well with our coordination. Moreover, our backgrounds offer us exhaustive skills and thus complement us to kickstart the operations as soon as possible.

End Paragraph

Hope to catch up soon tomorrow to discuss further. Thanks a lot for the kind gesture of joint business endeavour.

Warm regards,

Niraj

Review of IELTS letter to a friend who proposed you to be a business partner

  • The reader can notice that the author keeps an informal tone right from the introduction to the end paragraph. Instead of beating around the bush, the writer comes to the letter’s point in the second sentence itself.\
  • Each paragraph has a definite purpose as each satisfies one instruction of the letter.
  • All ideas and paragraphs are connected well with the help of linking devices.
  • The use of adjectives such as ‘exhaustive’ to describe the two people’s combined skills shows the writer’s maturity.
  • Lastly, the author uses a variety of sentence structures. 
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