Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain
Write at least 150 words
You do NOT need to write any addresses
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Mohmmad Khan who holds a Car Insurance (LIC1528) of your company. I am responding to your letter updating me about the increased insurance premium for my car from next month.
As you will be aware, if you check my records, I have held my insurance with your company for nearly seven years now. During this time, I have never had an accident and never had any reason to make a claim on my insurance.
I understand that prices need to be hiked to match current inflation, however, an increase of 40% in the amount I pay each month is a bit too steep and I see no financial reason for it.
In the process, I would like you to enlighten me about such an astronomical increase. If the reply is unable to justify the move to my satisfaction, I am afraid, I will have no other option but to move my insurance to another company.
I look forward to hearing from you. Thanks for your kind attention.
The writer understands the tone of the letter and uses proper salutations. The writer has not repeated any words and uses a variety of sentence structures. The writer has not committed any major grammatical errors and the minor errors do not affect the meaning of the sentences.
The writer has not properly addressed the sub-question ‘why you think the insurance should not be increased’. The writer has presented contradictory ideas in the letter. For example,
As you will be aware, if you check my records, I have held my insurance with your company for nearly seven years now.
If you check my records, I have held my insurance with your company for nearly seven years now.
The writer has used informal words which might give the sentences an impolite tone. For example,
In the process, I would like you to enlighten me about such an astronomical increase.
I would like you to give me a valid reason for such a sharp increase.